初一介绍朋友的英语作文

初一介绍朋友的英语作文

My friend.

(本文来自：WWw.DXF5.com 东 星 资 源 网:初一介绍朋友的英语作文)I have a good friend whoes English name is lisa.She is twelve years old and she is a very pretty girl.Everyone in our class including teachers like her,but I am her only best friend.We share everything we have and we nearly talk everything with each other.We both learn well,and we always learn together and help each other.She was very out-going and cute.She likes tell jokes and funny things.She likes smiling,you could always find simil blooming in her face.I like her not only because shind inside.Well that is my best friend.

初一介绍朋友的英语作文

本文优点： 层次分明，中心明确。

美中不足： 个别地方用词不够准确。内容过于简单，如果对人物外貌和性格特征加以补充的话，将会很充实。

 

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初一介绍朋友的英语作文

Xiaoping is a Chinese girl. She likes Chinese food. She likes dumplings a lot. She has dumplings for every breakfast. But she doesn t like milk at all. She says her brother Xiaoming likes milk very much, but he doesn t like vegetables or noodles. She likes orange juice very much.

She likes sports. Her favourite sport is swimming. She goes swimming in the lake near her home every day. (指导师：王子爱)