2016济宁中考英语作文题目
八、写作（共1小题，计15分）73．假如你是李梅．你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的E－mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事．请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封E－mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．
Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）
要 求：
1．文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；
2．文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息；
3.100 词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
【考点】图画作文．
【分析】这是一篇图画作文．内容是给Tom回复一封E－mail，向他讲述司马光砸缸的故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1描述图画：司马光和朋友一起玩捉迷藏，旁边有一口装满水的缸，一个小孩掉进缸里，其他小孩吓坏了，司马光想出主意，捡起石头扔向缸，缸破了，小孩得救了．
2询问对该故事及主人公的看法．
常用到的重点短语：
be interested in 对 感兴趣
fall into 掉入
be full of 充满
pick up 捡起
【高分句型】
1．I m very happy①that you②are interested in traditional Chinese stories．
①that引导的宾语从句．
②be interested in 对 感兴趣
2①．When the kids were playing，one child accidentally ②fell into the tank．①when引导的时间状语从句．
②fall into 掉入
3．Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．
so that 如此 以致于 ，that引导的结果状语从句．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories．
【高分句型】Well，let me tell you a famous one with the
Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard．There was a large water tank in the yard．It was full of water．（第一幅图）When the kids were playing，one child accidentally fell into the tank．【高分句型】Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．【高分句型】（第二幅图）However，Sima Guang was different．He thought it over and then had an idea．He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank．（第三幅图） Bang! ，the tank broke and the water ran out．The kid was saved．（第四幅图）
Do you like the story？What do you think of Sima Guang？（询问对该故事及主人公的看法．）
I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Li Mei
（编辑：bruce）